This is Xiilnek, here from livejournal... I just wanted to say that this is the absolute best Marcone voice I've ever read. I mean. It's just. Perfect. The emotion and pragmatism fits together so perfectly, and the glimpses of his past blended so well with the story. All the relationships between everyone - Harry and Bob, Marcone and Hendricks, etc - came through so strongly, no matter how brief their appearance.

If you don't mind, I think I'm going to go stalk your journal for fic now. <3.